Your homepage has one job: to answer a stranger's first question quickly enough that they're willing to give you a second one. Most homepages don't. They open with a slogan, a stock photo and a call to 'discover more', which tells the visitor nothing.
Here's how to write a homepage that earns its keep.
The five-second test
Show your homepage to someone unfamiliar with your business for five seconds. Then close it. Ask them: what does this business do, who's it for and what would I do next if I were interested? If they can't answer all three confidently, the page isn't doing its job.
Above the fold: the four things that have to be there
The first screen on a phone is your most valuable real estate. Treat it like an ad you can't take down.
- A headline that says what you actually do, in plain English.
- A subhead that names who it's for and the outcome you produce.
- A primary call to action that's a verb, not a slogan ('Get a quote', not 'Discover us').
- One trust signal: a real photo, a logo strip, a recognisable client or a single testimonial.
Below the fold: the order that works
After the first screen, most homepages should follow the same rough flow. You can rearrange the order, but you usually need all of these blocks.
- Problem statement: the situation your customer is in.
- What you do: services or products in plain language.
- Proof: testimonials, case studies, recognisable logos or numbers.
- How it works: the simple steps from enquiry to delivery.
- About: a sentence on who you are and why you do this.
- Final call to action: the same one as the top, repeated clearly.
Words that quietly kill conversion
Some phrases sound professional but actually weaken trust. Replace them.
- 'Bespoke' is usually 'custom' or 'tailored'.
- 'Solutions' is usually a service you can name directly.
- 'World-class', 'cutting-edge' and 'industry-leading' all mean nothing.
- 'We strive to' usually weakens whatever follows.
- 'Discover more' should almost always be replaced by what they'll actually find.
Make the call to action the easy choice
Don't ask for a commitment that's bigger than the relationship. If you're a high-trust service, a free call beats a quote request. If you're a product, a starter pack beats a long form. Match the ask to the visitor's stage.
What to do next
Open your homepage on your phone. Rewrite the headline, subhead and primary call to action this week. Don't redesign the page. Don't change the navigation. Just change those three lines and watch your enquiries shift.
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